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Angel vs Devil by ~bob-dude:iconbob-dude:



The landscape was an open, spaces field. The grass was a normal green color and an average length. There where no trees as far as the eye could see. Just a few scrubs placed randomly around. Then a hot pink colored mist appeared from nowhere. In a few moments the mist started to take shape and eventually the mist took the form of a person. A moment latter the mist was gone and what was in place was what looked like a person. This being in question was female but looked much different then most others her age.

She had orange skin, short brown hair, a tale, and black horns on her forehead as well as pointed ears. She wore what appeared to be a Santa clause like outfit with a white boa on both her sleeves and her neck. She also had a scythe with her. Her name was Rose Mary Reaper and for the most part she liked her named she HATED it when she was made fun of for it. She was also 19 years old.

She then thought to her self. "Right all I have to do is beat my opponent and I win the mission. Or I could simply eat her soul and in slave the corpse if I was like the stock demon arch type." Then a green tentacle appeared out of her back and wrapped around a yellow glowing arrow that was sent strait for her. The tentacle then threw the arrow down on the ground. She then turned to face her attacker. Her attacker in question looked like some sort of medieval female night of some sort.

The knight’s armor however didn't look as if it was made of any metal on earth as it was mostly a glowing white, blue and yellow. She also had glowingly white bird like wings coming out from her armors shoulder plate. The female knight mealy stood in silence. Rose then said. "Nice try but you’re going to have to do a LOT better then that if you want to beat me."

The Knight then spoke. Her voice was soft but at the same time commanding and threatening. "Thou is mistaken demon, I have come not to 'beat' you. I have come to kill you!"

Rose then rolled her eyes and thought to her self. "Why is it EVERY time I fight an angel it's always the arrogant ones?"

She then replied to her opponent coolly. "Are you seriously deluded enough to think you can beat death?"

The angel said nothing and took her bow which she split into two parts and held them in her hands like knifes. She then flew down at Rose with a great speed and swiped her right hand at her. Rose let the blade come across her shoulder as she jumped back in pain.

The wound stung with a deep burning feel. Rose learned quickly on that because she was part devil like her mother "Her" that one of the most affective weapons to be used against her would be ones from Heaven or ones infused with Angelic Fire as a makeshift one. Rose ignored the pain and then much to the shock of the Angle, threw her scythe a good distance away on the ground. The angle then said. "My name is Havon.”

Another tentacle appeared from her back and began to take shape. In a matter of moments a large and thick katana was held in her hand. Rose then said. "Well then Havon, I won't need my scythe to kill something as weak as you."

"You underestimate me O being of the damned. You have no idea who you are dealing with."

"Oh right like I've never heard THAT line before."

The two beings of light and dark then charged at each other. The Knight combined her two blades into one blade and the two began exchanging blows. While Rose was more skilled with her weapon, the angle had the edge with her holy weapon. Rose then swung her katana at Havon however she let it hit.

When Rose pulled back her weapon and jumped back she saw that she had only left an adequate scratch to Havon's armor. Rose simply smiled and then brought out her Nergal wings and shot up into the sky. Havon quickly fallowed. After about five minutes of exchanging blows Rose had thought that her fight had gone on long enough and that she would play with Havon only a little more before finishing her off.

Plus she felt she had taken more then enough blows so it wasn't COMPLEATLY one sided. She then flew down and landed and Havon then did the same. Rose then decided to put her master’s move to good use. Then began to let her katana start glowing until an unholy spiral of purple energy was flowing thought it. She then ran right into the Angel and said to her. "Know your place."

With that she swung her blade and right as it connected with the Knight's armor Rose yelled out. "Banishing Blade!" The attack hit its home as Rose pushed it down slower and slower into the Angelic armor which was breaking bit by bit on every pasting second. Havon then took her sword and began to try to push back Rose's katana. Then the battle became a battle of strength and slowly but surely Havon was wining!

The more Rose was pushed back the more of an advantage Havon had. Rose had really had her fill of her "holier then you” opponent. Then much to the shock and fear of Havon, Rose had summoned her Nergal tentacles. She then congratulated her.

"Not bad. Not many force me to use my Nergal half in battle, considering I haven't been using my Scythe or normal fighting style. But I've played with you long enough." She then began to warp her Nergals around Havon and held her up. Two on the left arm, two on the right arm, two on the left leg and two on the right. Rose knew her face was drenched in sweat along with most of her body, her boa was now no longer snow white but more blacken color and she didn't care! Her face had the look of victory on it, as well as odds are the smell.

She then used one of her spare tentacle and took Havon's sword and threw it far out of her reach and then injected a mild but STILL painful electrical shock into her body. "I wonder how many electric volts your body can take before it burns into dust?" After a moment or two of zapping her Rose had FINALY decided that she had played with her food long enough and called her scythe to her, that and she was getting bored.

She then threw Havon on the ground with her Nergal powers. She then thought one more thing she could do. She quickly morphed her right hand into one of her pincers and then began squeezing Havon's helmet. It then looked almost like a nutcracker as slowly Rose put more power into her squeeze. The teeth in her pincer were starting to leave bite marks when the mask finally broke off. Rose then looked down past the pieces of broken helm and at Havon and saw the fear twisted in her light blue eyes.

She then went and did one of the most inhuman things one could have done to an angle. She kissed her. It wasn't just a small peck on the check either. It was a full lip on lip tongue on tongue action! After a minute Rose stopped and lifted her head back. Havon was all but broken at this point and her mind faltered. To be kissed the way by someone of the same gender like Rose had just done was unthinkable!

She knew that if anyone else from Heaven found out she would be banished forever. Rose then bent down and whispered at Havon, who was broken physically, and mentally. "Once I kill you I'm going to bring you back as devil like me or my mom. Then I'm going to force you into my army which you shall serve for the rest of your pitiful existence but don't worry I'll be sure to take GOOD care of you!"

Rose then pointed the bottom of the scythe which had a blade on not only the bottom but the back opposite to the main one as well and thrust it forward. Just as it was about to hit however a voice echoed to her. "Rose that is enough. Its clear level 5 is no longer a challenge for you." Havon, the field, the world around Rose began to melt away and in seconds she was in the Underworld training room, her great Uncle Nergal was looking at her with somewhat impression.

All of Rose's wounds and sweat were now gone as all she had fought was just an illusion. One so powerful it seemed real. That was the point of the Underworld training room dubbed the "Danger room" by some solders in the Underworld army after the group of mortals named the X-men.

"So tell me Rose Mary. What was up with that kiss and threat you gave that Angle?"

"Well I thought what better way to break an Angle of the same gender then to kiss them and then tell them your going to turn them into the one thing they hate? So how did I do?"

Nergal paused for a moment and thought her answer over. He then said” Not bad... You have made great progress in just four years after returning to your Kingdom. But your parents are STILL far above you. Tomorrow we are going to double the training level."

Rose just stuck her tongue at him and said. "You’re just not willing to admit that I'm getting better!" She then opened up a portal with her scythe and said. "If mom or dad asks where I am tell them I'll be with Dan or Kat okay?" She then stepped though the self made portal too her room too change into more appropriate clothing leaving an annoyed Nergal Jr in her wake.
©2007-2009 ~bob-dude
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This is a nice one shot on Rose I did, haven't done one in so long so I think it turned out nicely in the end. The person who can guess who taught Rose the Banishing blade move gets a pat on the back. no really guess I dare you! Edit: Went back and fixed most grammar stuff from before.
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the fighting was really good
lol at the obvious fan-service

again, the beginning lacked drama
it was a little bit dry

since this was only a single fight I won't bother you about the plot
by making it a simulation, you managed to explain some plot-holes

at certain points you are too descriptive, wich slows down the action
don't worry to leave afew things to the readers imagination

otherwise not bad, try something with more plot next time

and don't worry putting a litle bit introspective in it

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Yep, any part that took you by surprise?

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well
that kiss did, didn't expect her being that tipe
alto she DOES have the genes of HIM and Mandy so...

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Rose is strait sex wanting wise, but she can be evil when she has to be, but for the most part she is a good person. I had a feeling that kiss might through a few people off.

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well
simular to Mandy, who also isn't too interested in this things, but is ready to use them in order to get her goals

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Yep, Rose is not excatly the person you would like to make mad, she is also a bit senitive when people make fun of her name.

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"Are you seriously deluded enough to think you can beat death?". One of the greatest lines I've read in my life. Amazing fight, you really gave it important details and stuff like that. Keep it coming!
lol thanks mate! and thank YOU for faving it! BTW guess what dead swordsman taught Rose? Hint: He has to do with Final Fantasy. So are there any parts you liked or that grabbed out at you or do you think it's all good?

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