Well after a bit of debating I've posted the first rewrite chapter for what I can really only call *shivers* Rose's Grim Tales (seriously people, I need me a new title for this story. A brain dead monkey could come up with better names then me) For those of you who will take the time to even BOTHER to compare the rewrite to the original (assuming your eyes don't burn out of your skull as you read that piece of shit) you'll undoubtly notice that I've improve vastly in the two-ish years I've started writing, which is all well and good. But I seriously think I have a long ways to do before I'm truly and surly satisfied with my style and aside from QU I'll be need a crap load of feedback from anyone who even bothers to look at these chapters. So PLEASE of you're going to comment, be detailed about it. Tell me why you think something is great tell me why you disliked this or that. I need to know!

And in other news.... I really REALLY hate the DMV. And I'm generally not a 'extreme hatred' type of guy so that's saying something. Hell I don't even want to drive for that matter, there is nowhere I'd want to go that I couldn't get to by either walking or taking public transportation. Not to mention I still have to get my Learner's permit. Going to be my 4th or so attempt this Saturday so be sure to wish me luck.